What do these look like?

[Checkmate]

Hey guys got a question. I'm entering in a contest for a company logo design. I wanted to see your opinions on this. I have very little experience with logos so I'm not sure if this qualifies, but I thought I'd try my hand at it. What do these look like?

[Bullet Magnet]

I'd try to fit all of the text on one of the black doors closest to us. Reading the text is jarring due to the sharp contrast in background.